Estelle Platini<p>"La réécriture d'une construction passive pour la rendre active permet presque toujours de clarifier ce que l'on dit."</p><p>Exemple : Des millions de dollars ont été détournés de la firme.<br>Révision : Deux cadres ont détourné des millions de dollars de la firme.</p><p>Eva Parish (en) <a href="https://evaparish.com/blog/how-i-edit#passive-voice" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" translate="no" target="_blank"><span class="invisible">https://</span><span class="ellipsis">evaparish.com/blog/how-i-edit#</span><span class="invisible">passive-voice</span></a></p><p><a href="https://kolektiva.social/tags/clart%C3%A9" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>clarté</span></a> <a href="https://kolektiva.social/tags/%C3%A9crire" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>écrire</span></a> <a href="https://kolektiva.social/tags/r%C3%A9%C3%A9crire" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>réécrire</span></a> <a href="https://kolektiva.social/tags/constructionPassive" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>constructionPassive</span></a> <a href="https://kolektiva.social/tags/style" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>style</span></a> <a href="https://kolektiva.social/tags/impunit%C3%A9" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>impunité</span></a> <a href="https://kolektiva.social/tags/irresponsabilit%C3%A9" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>irresponsabilité</span></a> <a href="https://kolektiva.social/tags/m%C3%A9dias" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>médias</span></a> <a href="https://kolektiva.social/tags/infos" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>infos</span></a> <a href="https://kolektiva.social/tags/grammaire" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>grammaire</span></a> <a href="https://kolektiva.social/tags/fragilit%C3%A9" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>fragilité</span></a> <a href="https://kolektiva.social/tags/journaux" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>journaux</span></a> <a href="https://kolektiva.social/tags/presse" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>presse</span></a> <a href="https://kolektiva.social/tags/litt%C3%A9rature" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>littérature</span></a> <a href="https://kolektiva.social/tags/livres" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>livres</span></a> <a href="https://kolektiva.social/tags/corriger" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>corriger</span></a></p>