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"La réécriture d'une construction passive pour la rendre active permet presque toujours de clarifier ce que l'on dit."
Exemple : Des millions de dollars ont été détournés de la firme.
Révision : Deux cadres ont détourné des millions de dollars de la firme.
Eva Parish (en) https://evaparish.com/blog/how-i-edit#passive-voice
Eva ParishWhat I think about when I edit — Eva ParishI’m often asked to edit friends’ or coworkers’ writing, anything from emails to short stories to documentation. Recently, someone asked me how I edit. What am I looking for? How do I know what changes to make? That made me stop and think about what I’ve been doing semi-instinctually.